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A community for writers, like poems, fiction, non-fiction, short stories, long books, all those sorts of things, to discuss writing approaches and what's new in the writing world, and to help each other with writing.

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1. Try to be constructive and nice. When discussing approaches or giving feedback to excerpts, please try to be constructive and to maintain a positive vibe. For example, don't just vaguely say something is bad but try to list and explain downsides, and if you can, also find some upsides. However, this is not to say that you need to pretend you liked something or that you need to hide or embellish what you disliked.

2. Mention own work for purpose and not mainly for promo: Feel free to post asking for feedback on excerpts or worldbuilding advice, but please don't make posts purely for self promo like a released book. If you offer professional services like editing, this is not the community to openly advertise them either. (Mentioning your occupation on the side is okay.) Don't link your excerpts via your website when asking for advice, but e.g. Google Docs or similar is okay. Don't post entire manuscripts, focus on more manageable excerpts for people to give feedback on.

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4. All writing approaches are valid. If someone prefers outlining over pantsing for example, it's okay to discuss up- and downsides but don't tell someone that their approach is somehow objectively worse. All approaches are on some level subjective anyway.

5. Solarpunk rules still apply. The general rules of solarpunk of course still apply.

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Hi folks, and welcome to the 10th writing club update. That's right, it's the big "One-Oh" - we're in the double digits now.

I hope you are all safe and as well as can be, and able to find some time for creativity/writing. The weather here has been a hodgepodge of warm to surprisingly brisk; although seems to be angling towards warmer now. It will be nice to see the pollinators waking up and doing their rounds soon. Life doing its thing and all that.

Onward to our writers! By my count we've got:

Here is a link to last month's post if you'd like to refresh your memory, or just take a little trip down memory late.

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[–] hazeebabee@slrpnk.net 3 points 1 week ago (1 children)

Endings can be so tricky to get right. Any ideas on why this one has been eluding you? I know for me it can take a while before the story fully clicks and I know what I want the arc to be.

[–] ellie@slrpnk.net 3 points 1 week ago (2 children)

It's mostly because I'm a pretty extreme discovery writer. (Not that I recommend it, but it's how I best keep myself going.) Hence I kind of tried to write a more definite ending and failed, twice, which is why there is now a third book. This time I'm forcing myself to do at least the minimum of essential planning about the overall theme and message to actually wrap it up in a manner that will hopefully be satisfying and meaningful.

[–] Clockwork@slrpnk.net 3 points 1 week ago

Volunteering for some brainstorming if you need to get the ending right! I've done it many times for people in our (Italian) writing group 😁

[–] hazeebabee@slrpnk.net 2 points 1 week ago (1 children)

That makes alot of sense. I also kind of discover endings as I go. Best of luck discovering the right ending, i know how hard it can be :)

[–] ellie@slrpnk.net 2 points 1 week ago (1 children)

I have found I just have too many arcs to wrap up and too many thematic things to add in to purely "discover" it to make a satisfying ending to a series. At least so far I haven't managed to.

[–] hazeebabee@slrpnk.net 1 points 1 week ago

Makes sense, I've found with bigger and more complex stories writing out a condensed outline of what I've already written can help click things into place. It helps me see the structure more since I tend to get lost in the details. Again best of luck, endings are so important and so challenging!