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Hey everyone, I am working on a project for a science fiction college class. Initially I wanted to post a couple short stories I had ideas for on here, I still would like to do that. However as I started brainstorming and planning I realized one writing idea was longer form than a short story. So I still would like to post my short story once it is writing but I was wondering how people who write on here tend to actually start their writing, how much planning happens before ink hits paper as it were? Also how much help can newcomers find on Lemmy? I'd like to do a presentation on Lemmy as a resource similar to how reddit is commonly used. Any help would be appreciated!

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I'm big on preplanning. I start with ideas, not stories. So even if I have an idea I decide what the themes and philosophy of the idea is instead of structuring a story first.

Basic idea:

So i want to write a story on the horror of consciousness. So i wanna explore how fragile and fragmented consciousness really is, especially when placed in an alien context. That the mind is intricately tied to the body, and breaking that connection results in existential madness.

Story that could explore this:

In a scientific experiment, the consciousness of a predator and a prey animal are swapped to study how their behaviors and survival instincts change. What begins as a seemingly straightforward study spirals into a nightmarish descent into madness as each consciousness struggles to adapt to a body designed for the opposite role in the food chain.

This swap allows me to write about existential horror, where both creatures grapple with primal fear and alien 'sensory overload'. They can't even grasp the lir emotions.

(I'm actually not sure if I wanna go down this route for the story but its an option).

Stylistic choices:

For a story like this I know i can use some typical writing tools, like split povs, stream of consciousness writing and elements of body horror and eldritch madness as the aesthetic guides to dictate feeling and genre. (Although I'm not happy with the story and will probably go down some other route for the very same idea since I do wanna explore that).

Now i know a lot about the story from a simple exercise of knowing what I wanted in the first place. When you know the purpose your story serves your narrative can be more cohesive.

Similarly you can create a one paragraph summary of your story. Then write a one page descriptive summary. Then break that page into chapters or thirds. As you break it down and add details you create something very clear and concise. This is a more formulaic technique I've sometimes used for novella length writing. I find it fun.

[โ€“] Lacanoodle@literature.cafe 3 points 1 day ago* (last edited 1 day ago) (1 children)

As for how much help you can find on Lemmy, I'll be honest, not much. There will be a few positive voices there but you probably won't get more than 5 people giving feedback. This is a small instance on a small social media platform.

However I'll always be here to help on this community.

And @bonesofthemoon@lemmy.world is someone cool who's in these communities too!

Do go ahead and ask for any help you need. You'll have atleast me giving you feedback.

[โ€“] BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world 2 points 1 day ago (1 children)

Aww thank you for mentioning me. Happy to help any way I can.

[โ€“] Lacanoodle@literature.cafe 2 points 15 hours ago* (last edited 15 hours ago) (1 children)

You're a legend down round these parts!

There was a period where I was busy and wasn't posting to this community and your posts are the reason the community survived and even gave me hope that there's actually interest in the community.

[โ€“] BonesOfTheMoon@lemmy.world 2 points 13 hours ago

Aww I am glad to make it a good place. The membership has expanded a LOT!