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[–] ShittyBeatlesFCPres@lemmy.world 61 points 3 days ago (5 children)

Who the fuck wants poetry written by a machine? The whole point of poetry is that it’s an original expression of another human. It’s not a non-fiction book or decorative art. It doesn’t exist because we think it’s perfect. It exists because it’s a connection to another person.

Like, who gives a shit if a machine can churn out something like Langston Hughes “The Negro Speaks of Rivers.” . His life is what gives the poem its meaning.

I’m all for LLMs writing stuff but when people say it can create certain types of art, I want to use one to make a dismissive_wank.png image.

[–] FaceDeer@fedia.io 25 points 3 days ago (1 children)

The whole point of poetry is that it’s an original expression of another human.

Who are you to decide what the "point" of poetry is?

Maybe the point of poetry is to make the reader feel something. If AI-generated poetry can do that just as well as human-generated poetry, then it's just as good when judged in that manner.

[–] ShittyBeatlesFCPres@lemmy.world 0 points 3 days ago (1 children)

I’m the Poet Laureate of the Darvaza Gas Crater, that’s who I am to decide it.

[–] TheGrandNagus@lemmy.world 5 points 3 days ago* (last edited 3 days ago) (2 children)

I've never heard of that, but assuming that's a real thing and you're telling the truth, it still doesn't mean you get to decide what the "point" of poetry is for everybody else.

You aren't the arbiter of what people are allowed to enjoy or see value in. If 'Poem XYZ' resonates with a bunch of people, but you hate it on principle because of how it was created, that doesn't make their viewpoint invalid. To think it does is extremely arrogant.

[–] FaceDeer@fedia.io 10 points 3 days ago

The Darvaza gas crater is a hole in Turkmenistan that's leaking natural gas and is on fire. I'm quite sure they don't have a "poet laureate", it's literally just a hole in the ground.

But even if it was some metropolis, yeah, he'd be just some guy.

[–] DancingBear@midwest.social 5 points 3 days ago* (last edited 3 days ago)

I’m sorry but he really is the arbiter of who gets to decide the meaning of poetry, how the subjective experience of emotion is correctly described in written form, as well as the one who decides what is valuable and what should rightfully be cast aside and shunned, and even boooed!

All hail the Darvaza Gas Crater!!!

[–] leisesprecher 29 points 3 days ago (3 children)

If it's literally indistinguishable from human poetry, about as many people want to read it as there are people wanting to read human poetry. And that's about 12.

[–] ShittyBeatlesFCPres@lemmy.world 28 points 3 days ago (1 children)

I don’t give a fuck if it surpasses human poetry to a focus group or if poetry is popular enough for you to care. I’m making a larger point that it’s a misuse of technology. Some things are pointless without a human personally taking time to craft it. We have loads of inefficiently produced things that exist because they’re “handmade” or came from the heart.

It’s like when Google screwed up during the Olympics with that commercial where Gemini made a little girl’s fan letter for an athlete. The whole point of a fan letter from a little girl is that it’s personal and took time. It’s not supposed to be perfect and efficiently produced. It could be 80% misspelled and written in crayon and be more meaningful than anything a machine produces.

[–] tpihkal@lemmy.world 5 points 3 days ago

Literally dozens of them.

[–] Jolteon@lemmy.zip 4 points 3 days ago (1 children)

Poetry isn't for the one reading it, it's for the one writing it.

[–] FaceDeer@fedia.io 5 points 3 days ago (1 children)

Why publish books of it, then?

So they don't have to get other jobs

[–] themoonisacheese@sh.itjust.works 9 points 3 days ago (3 children)

I'll raise you one better: who the fuck wants poetry?

Like I know I sound like a fucking mongrel who can't appreciate art or whatever, but how many poems do you think the average person reads in their entire life? Maybe 2, for school? Poetry is just not that popular of an art form, so of course people aren't going to be good at distinguishing good from bad. Compare it to visual arts, where people have seen multiple examples, at least more than 3 times a year for their entire life, of good visual art.

[–] treefrog@lemm.ee 15 points 3 days ago* (last edited 3 days ago) (1 children)

That's a commodity/consumerist take on art.

I write poetry because making art feeds my soul. I share my poetry because it feeds others, especially other poets.

I don't write poetry to sell it on Amazon.

That's cool, I'm glad you are making something you enjoy. The point stands that the average Joe doesn't actually seek out poetry, be it man or machine-made, and will therefore be an exceptionally poor judge of a poems quality.

[–] Ilovethebomb@lemm.ee 3 points 3 days ago (1 children)

You're right, actually. How many people make a point of reading poetry? I've read a huge amount, especially when I was in school, as well as news articles, and of course an unfathomable number of comments.

Never have I decided to read poetry, not once.

[–] treefrog@lemm.ee 8 points 3 days ago

Poets. You know, people who appreciate making and sharing that kind of art.

[–] DancingBear@midwest.social 2 points 2 days ago

I wank for you

[–] fruitycoder@sh.itjust.works 3 points 3 days ago (1 children)

Does any poetry have any value without knowing the person that made it?

[–] ShittyBeatlesFCPres@lemmy.world 9 points 3 days ago (1 children)

Knowing a human made it is the point. To be crude, if a sex doll is your girlfriend, you’re single.

[–] fruitycoder@sh.itjust.works 2 points 2 days ago

Tbh that just doesn't seem right to me. Like the sunsets has beauty to me without being made. I watch shows and may never know the artist or hear a poetic phrase completely divorced from its context that has a profound meaning to me.