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How dare you to insult the holy music :) Thanks for the Tips tho
The only other mistake I can spot is a tough. When you say "Ik bezoek de Thunderdome dit jaar", I would have written "Ik ga de Thunderdome bezoeken dit jaar".
Consider the nuace in English between "I visit X" and "I will visit X".
Ah, dankjewel :)